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[plural]

another plura-mark haiku


the past can be sticky
living is in the leaping
I think you should jump

Comments

[lima-pcp.livejournal.com]

Neither of those are haiku.

[plural.livejournal.com]

aww crap

its 5-7-5 isnt it?

[ipsafictura.livejournal.com]

You're missing the seasonal reference necessary to make it a haiku. You've got a senryu there.

sen·ryu : a 3-line unrhymed Japanese poem structurally similar to haiku but treating human nature usually in an ironic or satiric vein

[plural.livejournal.com]

oh

damn

serves me right for sleeping in english class

[ipsafictura.livejournal.com]

Nothing wrong with a Senryu, they're perfectly nice things.

[http://users.livejournal.com/_sacchi/]

Ack! My fault actually. He asked me what the pattern was, and as I loathed freshman English class (the teacher was a horny pervert), and that was the year we studied poetry heavily, I forgot that detail.

*sigh* I need sleep.

*cough, ahem*

*grin*

[plural.livejournal.com]

indeed it is

you are so in trouble missy

[http://users.livejournal.com/_sacchi/]

*smiles sheepishly*

Well, I believe I told you the formation of a haiku on...oh...three hours sleep?

Not (completely) my fault! :P

[plural.livejournal.com]

yeah yeah

tell it to the judge lady

[ipsafictura.livejournal.com]

You're forgiven because your user icon is adorable.

[http://users.livejournal.com/_sacchi/]

Why thank you! I was actually, like, erm, thirteen in that picture? My mother finds it to be one of her favorites. *shrug*

I have to admit, your icon always gives me a good chuckle when I see it. *grin*

Caitlin

[ipsafictura.livejournal.com]

Thanks, this one is actually my favorite, but it isn't as all purpose as the fairy.

[http://users.livejournal.com/_sacchi/]

Heh, nice.

[plural.livejournal.com]

*grin*

Indeed

Indeed

[azul.livejournal.com]

damn, you beat me to it!!!!!

[ipsafictura.livejournal.com]

My poetry-fu is swift and powerful.

[lima-pcp.livejournal.com]

Yes it is, you damned
cannuck. Can't get a haiku
done right? You just suck.

[plural.livejournal.com]

as was pointed out
they are senryu

and with the exception of cheating
by considering "sticky" one syllable

they both follow 5-7-5

so *PHHBBBBbbbbbbt*

[atillathehung.livejournal.com]

I'm enjoying these haikus.

[plural.livejournal.com]

mmm

me too

*grin*

[pseudovillain.livejournal.com]

Amen brotha!