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fooling around with
some ideas for my final project

the assignment is to create five images
indvidually strong and independant
but that work together as a set
the media will be as postcards

dont really have a clue
what I am going to do
but I started playing around
and came up with these two images
would love to hear some feedback



Messed with this first


then came up with this idea




am thinking I like
the second one better
but not quite sure what could improve the first
anyhow
lemme hear what you think
it will be appreciated.

Date: 2003-04-25 06:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 13conversations.livejournal.com
is there a way to make the entire background look like a face and she's superimposed on it (sort of a reveal of the nose as perhaps the first optical clue within the corridor of color in front of her?)

Date: 2003-04-25 06:21 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] evilegg.livejournal.com
i don't get the connection between a scantily clad lady and what appears to be a basement stairway...if she was a bit more 'dominatrixy' i think i'd like it better.

Date: 2003-04-25 06:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thawaltzingfool.livejournal.com
I honestly like both of them. Although I'm not sure if I like the first one for your project or just because of the beautiful naked woman with the incredible body.

The second one is dreamy and surreal with a soft heart. The image of the girl needs to be pulled over to the left a bit, not the whole image, just the left corner so she will lay flatter and mesh better with the green.

very cool.

Date: 2003-04-25 08:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ferretsofglory.livejournal.com
Wow. Overall I really dig the colors on both. I think the second one better responds to the theme of the project. That could be just me though. Both are great!

Oh, yeah, had bounced over from Stickgirl, just saying Hi.

Hi!

Date: 2003-04-26 01:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] plural.livejournal.com
Thanks for your input,
yeah the first one was playing around with a concept, where as the second one had more coherent idea from the start, as after playing with the first, I had a better idea of what I wanted to do.

and anyone who bounces over here from my lil stickie is always welcome, so hi there

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