Love's Labor Lost

[plural]

her eyes
flash
with a
wicked smile

our lips join
mismatched
pulling gently
the left half
of her upper lip
between mine
letting it slide
back
through my teeth

touching
sliding my hands lightly
down the curve of her back
my fingernails draw
loose waves
up her side

draping my lips
along the warmth
of her neck

my fingers play lightly
along the backs of her arms
my teeth bared
drag lightly down her neck
her shoulder
nipping on occasion

down

the length of her arm
pausing briefly
at the inside of her elbow

sucking gently
raking the tender flesh
with my teeth

and again
at her wrist

my lips brush
against the top of her hand

eyes
glancing up
as if to say...

dahlin?

Comments

[shaei.livejournal.com]

Wow ...

oh my

[debgirl001.livejournal.com]

*swoon*
*fluttering eyelashes*
*sly smile*
*swoon again*
*and again*
*one more time*

nevermind.

[celiapunk.livejournal.com]

beauuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuutiful!

you get a gold star for that one....maybe 2....

[budhaboy.livejournal.com]

ahhh, ya faddah raised a nancy-boy, and ya muddah wears combat boots...

Re:

[celiapunk.livejournal.com]

MY Mother wore combat boots, ain't npthin wrong with that....

Re:

[budhaboy.livejournal.com]

I suppose not.

omigod

[(Anonymous)]

'nuff said.

Hot and bothered.

[dogmaticsusie.livejournal.com]

I want sex to be like that. I guess I could say that it is (or at least that's what it's like BEFOREhand) but you never think of it in terms of words, just feelings. Maybe I'll start narrating the bits and pieces in my mind. :)

beautiful

[triscuit.livejournal.com]

i love a man who pays attention to detail. have you ever had your toes sucked? fucking unbelievable. the only part i would have left out was the m'lady part at the end. personally, it kinda ruined it for me. a little archaic and stodgy. just my opinion.