plural: (maltese)
plural ([personal profile] plural) wrote2001-04-25 05:37 pm

a social experiment

follow the instructions below
first click

"comment on this"

do not click "read comments"

then proceed to apply whatever punctuation
you believe is necessary to
the following sentence,

"Woman without her man is nothing"

post your reply
and continue
on with your life

thank you
for your
cooperation

[identity profile] damion.livejournal.com 2001-04-25 05:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, I think you need an A in there, but as it stands:
Woman, without her man, is nothing.

[identity profile] lianna.livejournal.com 2001-04-25 05:57 pm (UTC)(link)
"Woman! Without her, man is nothing."
:P

A technicality

[identity profile] damion.livejournal.com 2001-04-25 05:59 pm (UTC)(link)
He said that it was one sentance :D

Re: A technicality

[identity profile] lianna.livejournal.com 2001-04-25 06:05 pm (UTC)(link)
"proceed to apply whatever punctuation
you believe is necessary to
the following sentence.."

he did not say it needed to remain one sentence.

Re: A technicality

[identity profile] damion.livejournal.com 2001-04-25 06:09 pm (UTC)(link)
When he said "the following sentance" he indicated that the modifications were to be to the one sentance. By splitting it into two sentances, you are no longer adding punctuation to that sentance. You are instead adding punctuation to two seperate sentances.

oh come on.

[identity profile] hellarad.livejournal.com 2001-04-25 06:15 pm (UTC)(link)
i feel the
need to quote
the post now, too.

"continue on with your life"

does it really matter?

Re: oh come on.

[identity profile] damion.livejournal.com 2001-04-25 06:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Of course not.
But we've all bitten, so we might as well have fun with it :D

Re: A technicality

[identity profile] lianna.livejournal.com 2001-04-25 06:22 pm (UTC)(link)
The modifications I made were to that one sentence.
He said "apply whatever punctuation
you believe is necessary", which I did.
The fact that the punctuations made two sentences from what once was one sentence, is irrelevant.

Picking nits

[identity profile] damion.livejournal.com 2001-04-25 06:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Except you had to seperate them into two sentances before you could add the punctuation. Putting an end capping punctuation mark in the middle of a sentance doesn't make a new sentance, it just makes it wrong :D
Forgive me if I'm getting on your nerves though. If you care to respond again, I'll not argue.

Re: Picking nits

[identity profile] lianna.livejournal.com 2001-04-25 06:33 pm (UTC)(link)
My, aren't you sententious ;)

lovely moth btw..or is it a butterfly?

Re: Picking nits

[identity profile] damion.livejournal.com 2001-04-25 06:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooooh... good word :D
Thanks. It's the best picture of a lunar moth I could find.

[identity profile] hellarad.livejournal.com 2001-04-25 06:11 pm (UTC)(link)
woman.
without her,
man is
nothing.

[identity profile] strike-anywhere.livejournal.com 2001-04-25 06:13 pm (UTC)(link)
?!

well, i have my suspicions on how most people are going to punctuate it.

[identity profile] lostdream.livejournal.com 2001-04-25 06:38 pm (UTC)(link)
so i'm going to do so differently, without looking. and hope that i am right. because generally people prefer to be pc, non?

"Woman without her man, is nothing"

rebel-ish
dream

..

[identity profile] whorlpool.livejournal.com 2001-04-25 07:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Woman: without her, man is nothing.

Re: ..

[identity profile] damion.livejournal.com 2001-04-25 07:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Oof. :D

[identity profile] ex-moriah701.livejournal.com 2001-04-25 09:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Women without men are nothing.

[identity profile] rosiepj.livejournal.com 2001-04-25 10:08 pm (UTC)(link)
I will make two different corrections.
"Woman without man is wo."
"Woman without her man is nothing?"
ok, three.
"Woman, without her, man is nothing"

[identity profile] zaiah.livejournal.com 2001-04-25 10:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Women! Without her, Man is No thing.

[identity profile] mfluder.livejournal.com 2001-04-26 12:09 am (UTC)(link)
woman, without her man is nothing.

[identity profile] mnemosyne.livejournal.com 2001-04-26 07:11 am (UTC)(link)
woman. without her, man is nothing.

Punctuation being not exactly my strong point....

[identity profile] licoricelaces.livejournal.com 2001-04-26 07:41 am (UTC)(link)
Woman : Without her, man is nothing.

[identity profile] lilybleu.livejournal.com 2001-04-27 01:05 pm (UTC)(link)
woman, without her, man is nothing.

He.

[identity profile] ironmaus.livejournal.com 2001-04-28 02:37 am (UTC)(link)
You know, I have this terrible feeling that all 23 of the people who've gone before me have gone the riot grrrl, politically correct route and written: "Woman; without her, man is nothing."

Shit.

Well, how about this:

"Woman. Without her, man, is nothing."

There, that'll stand out from the crowd.